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My REVIEW on last nights game...
This is sort of an article...written for the fansite I'm putting together, but since the website is currently still in the development stages (almost done), I thought I'd post it here too...mainly because I can't let anyone go to the new site yet.
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Thanks, it was a long read, but fairly accurate and informative.
Good luck with your endeavor. GO BUCS! Last edited by Q-man; 08-31-2007 at 02:24 PM.. |
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Very nice article! You wrote a very nice summary of the game and the performance of the individual players. I thought you stated the facts without criticizing or praising unduly. I also thought you did a beautiful job conveying the feelings of everyone watching the game when Paris Warren was injured. I was also really heartwarmed by the compassion and respect his teammates, as well as the Texan players, showed Warren.
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Not hating here...but your opening two paragraphs are clearly overdramatization and it really makes the rest of the article on Paris a little less potent.
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Is the inzone near the outzone?
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Clemzon sux!
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seriously.
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With that said, there are some errors to correct if you are going to post on a website. It's a nice read, and I congratulate you on your endeavors. Just remember to proof-read, it goes a long way for credibilty.
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Thanks for the complements. I realized as I was writing that article that I had made some mistakes, and forgot to go back and fix them.
My bad. ![]()
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You fix those typos yet?
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Nice read! 2 thumbs up!
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